Title: Phases (working title) Draft Part Two
Author: Trojie
Rating: PG (blood, violence) Pre-slash
Notes: This leaves off right where the last one ended. It hasn't been betaed, unless you count me staring at it and rewriting bits for several months as 'betaed'. Even Bridget hasn't looked at it (cue GASP! from f-list). So, you've got comments? Typos, bad sentences, things that don't make sense, stylistic comments ... anything you have to say, I desperately want it.

writing a story where there are only really two characters and everything happens in the present tense is trickier than I thought )
Title: Phases (working title) Draft Part One
Author: Trojie
Rating: PG (blood, fighting)
Notes: Okay, here it is. A section of very raw original fiction. Please, any comments, on style, on continuity, on things you didn't understand, I want them.

Trojie posts quickly before she bottles out )

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