More of Trojie's werewolf story.
Nov. 27th, 2008 08:25 pmTitle: Phases (working title) Draft Part Two
Author: Trojie
Rating: PG (blood, violence) Pre-slash
Notes: This leaves off right where the last one ended. It hasn't been betaed, unless you count me staring at it and rewriting bits for several months as 'betaed'. Even Bridget hasn't looked at it (cue GASP! from f-list). So, you've got comments? Typos, bad sentences, things that don't make sense, stylistic comments ... anything you have to say, I desperately want it.
( writing a story where there are only really two characters and everything happens in the present tense is trickier than I thought )
Author: Trojie
Rating: PG (blood, violence) Pre-slash
Notes: This leaves off right where the last one ended. It hasn't been betaed, unless you count me staring at it and rewriting bits for several months as 'betaed'. Even Bridget hasn't looked at it (cue GASP! from f-list). So, you've got comments? Typos, bad sentences, things that don't make sense, stylistic comments ... anything you have to say, I desperately want it.
( writing a story where there are only really two characters and everything happens in the present tense is trickier than I thought )