Pete was meant to be a Saint Peter figure, yeah. I like the idea of the Angels being backstage crew and techies. Hence also the appearance of Paul and Gabrielle (I originally wrote her as Gabriel, and male, but it didn't sound right).
As to the POV shifts, hmm. I wonder if I can fix that *goes to her drawing board* This may get edited again later. Ta for concrit, always it is dear to my heart :)
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Date: 2008-07-19 09:25 pm (UTC)As to the POV shifts, hmm. I wonder if I can fix that *goes to her drawing board* This may get edited again later. Ta for concrit, always it is dear to my heart :)